Great chapter!
I do have a small issue with the skylight in the storm shelter though.
Wouldn't that be un-safe, considering it's basically a window on the ceiling, and if the storm went over it the glass could break, hurting the people inside the shelter?
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble,
Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
