Had a hard time catching up on the story, since the TOC wasn't up-to-date.
You do very well at establishing characters. One of my pet peeves with crossovers is that you are assumed to know as much as the author does.
Jason was well-established. Very plausable history with an equally plausable vendetta. Even a thief is allowed one item of value, so this is a nice character. Is Jason yours or borrowed from an episode of Remington Steele I don't remember?
I thought it a stretch that everyday people are invited to such an exclusive party, no matter where they were sitting. Of course, I'm a great believer in writer's fiat, so you as the author can do what you want. But by allowing Groggins and company in, it doesn't seem as high society anymore.
Still I'm enjoying the story and am happy to be caught up. I notice each new installment, even if I was too far behind to read right away.
Elisabeth
