Interesting... I assume there will be more parts to this right? Just a note, you might want to put "1/10" or however many chapters you're going to make it, just to clear up some confusion. But anyway, I'm pretty intrigued. Of course, bad guys want to kill Lois all the time, but to actually want to MAKE her scream... Even if Big Blue was all the way in China, I'd be still taking all precautions to shut Lois Lane up. The guys must have some different sort of plan. Well... I'm hooked, lol.
Great start.
Laura
