You know, this started out as something that might be light and fluffy, a funny story about two men in one suit. I expected a happy romp full of jokes and funny misunderstandings and lots of Lois trying to figure out what's going on.
But it's not that simple, is it?
Even with the humor ("Don't use that tone of thought with me!") this isn't light-hearted. This has turned very serious very quickly. The impersonal hero and the very human-feeling Clark won't be able to co-exist for much longer, and I wonder how you plan to resolve this dilemma.
This is an excellent premise, and I hope you continue soon. I'm eager to know where you're going with this.
