I read the first chapter when it came out but for various reasons didn't read any of the others till a little while ago.
Very impressive. Not the run of the mill capture - escape story. I am delighted to see Lois in counseling. I like the way your Clark is torn up and still dealing with things.
I am delighted that Lois saw all Clark's notes on Luthor. I hope he decides to share his notes and such with General McPheron of the Primaries.
Clark needs help in dealing with Lex. The Primaries and Henderson look like good sources of help.
This story takes place shortly (very shortly) after The Green Glow of Home.
So Nightfall hasn't happen yet?
I hope you will follow this all the way through the Fall of Luthor and the Nightfall asteroid incident.
I also hope Clark does not tell Lois. I'd like to see her, Lois, come to see the truth about both Luthor and Clark on her own.
Nicely done.
