You really meant it when you said that part 4 would end with a cliff hanger!
“Oh, we already have the upper hand, Lois,” Richard said as he turned to walk back inside the building. When he came walking back out, Clark felt a sickening weakness go flooding through him. His legs faltered and he dropped down to his knees in front of Richard.
Does Richard have Kryptonite to weaken Clark to submissive mode? And let us not forget that Jason will be effected by Kryptonite as well. I can see that happening and Richard putting two and two together and getting "Jason is Superman's child!"
Wow! I am really anxious to see/read what comes next. This was very well written!
