Hey Nancy - I hope your migraine goes away soon, if it hasn't already. I know how nasty a thing that is to have to suffer through.
Ask about what?
Flash shrugged. He'd just have to ask about it later....
mmm.. ok, I thought that was obvious, I guess I messed it up when I changed what Superman said before he grabbed Flash and flew him up in the air.
Originally, upon having his super-hearing kick in, Superman said "Ah, damn it!" -- but then I thought maybe this was too much out of character for him to say. Then again, maybe not... If I had left that, would it have helped understand what is going on better?
Cause the thing is, his super-hearing kicked in when he heard Jimmy shout "I told you so", after which he heard Lois answer back and he realized that both of them where out there someplace. Of course it's raining like hell and they could be in danger, so the good super being that he is, needs to go check up on them. Hence, instead of going *with* Flash to the Wizard's hideout, he flew him up to be able to show him where to go while he himself goes and rescues his friends...
I'll see how I can change it to make it crystal clear that this is what's going on. Sorry about that!
Gotta forgive the litttle French-Canadian girl, here... orks? I don't get it. ?! (the only orks I know are in "Warhammer" games and I'm pretty positive this isn't what you're referring too!)
Turn the water off or you'll kill her!"
So my question is: How the heck does the woman take a bath??
Sonic shower, I guess? Like Star Trek... I dunno... Maybe she shakes it off? She's made of electricity, I'm not sure dirt sticks to her anyway. hehehehehe!!!
Sorry I have so little time to comment, Lara, but thi still feels like one of those happy colorful kiddie comic books I read when I was, uh, a kid - and that is meant to be a compliment!
Thank you, Ann! You have no idea what this means to me. I'm just about doing the happy dance over here.
Thank you both for the comments! I'm glad you enjoyed this part.
I've got a good chuck of part 10 written now (couldn't sleep last night. *lol*) and after the last two parts that had all the bad guys and stuff, this one is going to be a whole lot sweeter. Quite possible this will be the last one -- for real, this time.
