Hi Dandello,
I was reading your story - and then it stopped in mid-sentence, like this:
Clark smiled, a rare thing these days. “Thanks chief.”
“Could be Kerth winner,” Perry told him. Clark’s smile faltered. “I know it won’t be the same without Lois there, but you’re the best investigative reporter I’ve got. Just remember that time does heal.”
“I know, chief,” Clark sai
What has happened there? From the FDK of other readers I can see there´s something missing which I can´t see. Could you please help me?
By the way, I like your story - as far as I could read it.
