This story is just awesome! ..what really worries me is that it ends well. How can Tank's story end so well? So it's a bit dark and all - and Lois gets a haircut all right, but... no signature Tank ending? Yeah... something's wrong. Definitely. hehehe!
The whole "take 1" bit makes me anxious to see what "take 2" is like, I'm all excited here. And I love that.
I'm definitely seeing other clones showing up in there. Yep! Of course it's also possible there is no take 2 and all our hopes will be crushed...? Or maybe it's Tank that's been cloned??
Ok, I think too much, don't I?
Looking forward to the unraveling of this little 'take' mystery.