AmyPrime, that's an enormous compliment - thank you so much! I was really worried about each other character being specific and, well, likeable so I really appreciate your kind words. I hope you enjoy the rest of it, and that it's a satisfying reveal at the end. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Peixinho, Superman is definitely going to get a workout here, don't worry! lol

Bakasi, thank you!!! I'm so glad the suspense worked here! Thanks for commenting!

Anna, thanks for catching that; I redirected the link. So glad that you liked this chapter! The stakes and adventure definitely ramped up here a bit! I'm so happy to see your excitement!

Verity, thank you so much! I also like when Lois really gets to fully Lois - investigating, taking charge, kicking butt; it's fun to try to write her both as she sees herself but also the way Clark sees her.


Looking forward to this summer's Location Challenge! Looks like stories are due around August 1st, and then polls open for voting!

And don't forget about the 2026 fundraiser! Head over to the Fundraising page to donate or consider adding a story to the Keepsake Collection fundraising drive!