FDK for chapter 3

I loved it. Lois's doubts, the way Clark reacts (he really does need some rest, by the way), and their conversation. I was relieved they were finally able to talk, even though I was really hoping Lois would be able to tell him she loves him too.

FDK for chapter 4

Another conversation I loved, this time between Lois and Mayson. And now Mayson knows! Wow. I like how they both recognize that the other is important to Clark. And I have to admit I felt sorry for Mayson when she realized that taking a bullet for someone isn't always proof of love after all...

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Lois wanted to strangle her. “Why else would he spend a whole night watching over you, though he was in desperate need of sleep after he saved all those people from the tsunami? Why else would he risk any chance at a normal life to make sure Intergang doesn’t kill you? When he decided to come with you as Clark, he knew very well that any stray bullet might expose him. You think he’s doing this to make himself look good?

This part is especially interesting.

Now I'm wondering whether Lois will continue to feel insecure, considering that Mayson knows the truth and didn't completely freak out when she learned Clark is Superman.
I'm glad Henderson showed up, and I hope Clark will be alright in the end. Can't wait for the next chapter wave


Stories are written by the victors.
(Hmm, come to think of it, that's not the exact quote...)