What a wonderful chapter! The thought of Lois' mother, who's struggling to make ends meet while raising a child and still managing to set aside enough money to pay her life insurance premium so her daughter would someday be financially secure ... that got me right *there.*

I also have to echo what others have already said — I love your Lois, and the writing is simply gorgeous.

Can't wait to read the next part!


~ Crystal

"Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien