I'm so pleased that others are finding this story as engaging and enthralling as I've been, beta reading it. The reversal is intriguing and your Lois beautifully conveyed. And the language you use rich and evocative. Postively poetic.

Looking forward to seeing more in my mailbox soon!

LabRat smile


Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers