Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
If you hammer us with a new part every day, we won't be able to digest one before we have to jump to one or two more. And this story needs space to digest it, just like Clark needs space to heal. He can't rush his recovery (which we assume will end with Superman back in Metropolis even though you haven't stated that - yet) and we can't rush this excellent tale. Please space it out a little to let us ache with Clark and build up suppressed angst and generalized anxiety for the eventual resolution, whatever that might be.

Thank you for that recommendation. I'll work on spacing things out a bit further!


Originally Posted by bakasi
He left because he didn't want to burden her

He is destined to be a lunkhead it seems

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