Songbird, thank you so much for jumping onto the first story and going along for the ride for this one! I believe in happy endings, and they're definitely going to earn theirs!
Michael, I so appreciate you taking so much time to chat. Thank you for the *yay* - this will definitely be the end of this one. I've got other adventures in the works for these two.
“Any time now!” she said testily, looking up into the sky.
He was supposed to be here by now.
Oooh, this starts off fun! Reminds me of the feeling when comic-strip-Lois is in danger, unfazed.
Totally the vibe!
She’d cross her fingers if she had a free hand…
Excellent writing clap
Thank you! My betas really babied me through this little section because I was worried the structure wouldn't work. But Sara has such magical notes!
he often caught himself wishing that this wasn’t his [i]whole everything. And it worried him what Lois and his parents might say to that.
“finally”?
EXACTLY!
After all, he and Lois had enough trouble finding quality time together as it was.
Dr. Friskin: And why do you think that is the case?
Lois: It's a plot device. Clearly.
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