I'm coming late to this party... and all I can say is wow. This is amazing - so poignant, beautiful, heartwrenching, just about any adjective you can think of. It has me all choked up. Poor, poor Lois.

And such beautiful, lovely writing from you!

These paras probably affected me most:

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Did anyone notice the ghost walking through the streets of Metropolis tonight?

Does anyone know if ghosts can find each other if they want to badly enough? Can ghosts love each other? And be together?

What if one of those ghosts’ hearts didn’t stop? What if it just broke?

Is there some place where a living ghost and a dead ghost can be together? Where they can love one another. Where nothing can harm them and nothing can hurt them?
Just... wow. whinging

Just a fly-by! *waves*