Th-thump-th-th-*crack!*... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me

That is the sound a heart makes when it breaks. Honest. You can trust me, I'm the self proclaimed Sound King.

And... Yes, I'll take all the credi-... blame for this one!

Anyway, you know how much I loved this story Nicole! (Can you believe she wasn't going to post?)

I could probably quote at least two thirds of the story in here, but I'll contain myself.

*ahem*

I especially loved... this line:

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His heart *stopped*. But mine broke.

That's just... it. Perfect.

And this bit:

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If someone had only told me how everything could… how he would…

I wouldn’t have gone.

But I went.

And he went.

We went together.

And then...

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How could I not have let him know? A compliment here. A touch there.

And... and... *deep breath*

Perfect.

Dave

Phew! For a moment, I thought she had killed herself.

Beautiful story. So touching!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

call me morbid, but I love these kind of stories.

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He died for me! Did you know that? He was brave. He was good. He was perfect. And he loved me. Purely. Genuinely. Selflessly. Completely. Can you imagine being loved that much? By someone like him? Can you imagine it?

I loved this part...well I love all of it, but this got me.

Great job

FinLi

Amazing, heart wrenching story. Beautifully written and showed the depths of her feelings for, Clark.

I'm coming late to this party... and all I can say is wow. This is amazing - so poignant, beautiful, heartwrenching, just about any adjective you can think of. It has me all choked up. Poor, poor Lois.

And such beautiful, lovely writing from you!

These paras probably affected me most:

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Did anyone notice the ghost walking through the streets of Metropolis tonight?

Does anyone know if ghosts can find each other if they want to badly enough? Can ghosts love each other? And be together?

What if one of those ghosts’ hearts didn’t stop? What if it just broke?

Is there some place where a living ghost and a dead ghost can be together? Where they can love one another. Where nothing can harm them and nothing can hurt them?

Just... wow.

Nicole

WOW!

Tricia