Oh this was just so incredibly well done. So sad, and melencholy. I like that you have Alt Clark believing that he couldn't feel the same way for *his* LOis...because at that point, he WOULD think that.
He fell for Lois Lane of a different Metropolis and just because H.G. Wells told him his love was misplaced, doesn't make it just evaporate for him. To him, *his* Lois doesn't exist. All that does is the woman he met.
So sad. Excellent vignette.
