Well she made a believer out of me! Lois Lane is just sooo good when she is angry but manages to stay cool and focused under pressure. You nailed the best part of her character Queen. Not to mention, how well you captured the extreme lunkhead side of Clark!

Great story. Well-written. Love the fresh take on the evolution of their relationship. Makes me wish I could read the backstory that got them to this point.

Thanks for sharing.