This is great, really love it.
You pretty much cover all aspects and issues of their growing relationship, directly and indirectly. And the revelation without complications, angry rants or guilt trips. Just Clark being remorseful for underestimating Lois.
Lois insights into superman is what is often overlooked, considering how intelligent she is. In my mind she has been holding herself back, not asking questions or confronting superman in order to prove that she can be trusted. She is waiting for Superman to trust her and share himself with her when he is ready.
The only thing missing is Lois bursting into laughter again when she realizes that Clark has been jealous of himself.
Looking forward to a story about WorldCon, I can just imagine Lois being a minx and constantly trying to distract or embarrass the guest of honour.
