Originally Posted by Millefeuilles
Hello Folc4,
What a great story! I'm enjoying it tremendously.

Reading still in progress, but I'm dropping by for a minute to write a few words.

Chapter 1: Yeah!! ADULTS! At long last! hyper
Chapter 2 :

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...as the DEA Agent stood to his feet, attempting to brush the mayonnaise and cheese off his face...

rotflol Thank you, thank you, thank your for that image. It's burned in my brain!

Back to reading! More later.

Mille! **pounce**

So good to see you. I haven't seen you in ages! Thanks for stopping by to read my muse's attempt to fix Resurrection. lol I'm so glad I could put the mental image of Dan Scardino with cheese and mayonnaise all over his face in your brain. It was satisfying to knock him down a few pegs.

Originally Posted by Millefeuilles
Bravo!

I loved your story and for instance, how you handled Lois's thoughts after the big revelation! Having Scardino definitively humbled (is that possible for long?) was a welcome and added bonus!!! clap

I'm wondering how Jimmy and Perry will react to the new relationship between the star reporters... I hope a sequel will tell us that.

I'm not sure if you can definitively humble Scardino cuz he does think a lot of himself but in this fic he got a bit of a reality check. wink Glad you liked the reveal and Lois' reaction. Perry and Jimmy I'm sure will figure it out, but it's not like they didn't know they were dating. I just made the bump in the road a bit...smoother is all. **puts away sandblaster**

~ Folc4evernaday

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