Yes. I am. Time is really tight these days so I will drop a line whenever possible. Good job with this story!
Glad Mallow survived. I never liked how his character was thrown away on a demonstration. Gotta love Henderson and the boys in blue!
Isn’t Dan’s leg still healing? There wasn’t any mention of crutches or him wearing a cast. In this fic he is still the same arrogant nitwit from the series. He sounds hurt and disappointed that Lois is now engaged. Did he really expect her to sit around waiting for him?
Sarah Silverman is really cool. Another character who should have been around for more a that episode.
If Sam Lane cannot be so bothered to call either of his daughters, why bother trying to get him involved in the wedding? Ellen should not have bothered to meet with him if she cannot handle her feelings when he’s around. Perry or Uncle Mike would be thrilled to walk Lois down the aisle.
On to the next part ...
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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