Okay giving this a bump since it obviously got buried over the weekend.
Chapter 3 as challenging as it was to get it right really did turn out great. I love Jack's reaction and how you have Clark relating to him and in a place to help him just as Bruce had done for Clark so many years ago. Nicely done.
Thanks, Val! I never dreamed Jack would be so difficult to get right, but man, he gave me a run for my money! Even with me being fluent in sarcasm as a second language!
It was pretty satisfying, however, to give Clark the chance to be the one helping. Brought it nicely full circle, even if he can't open his doors to Jack and Denny like Bruce did for him.
