I truly enjoyed the first part (two parts?). Your writing style reminds me somewhat of Morgana's as both are extensively researched and offer in-depth detail into each character. So far this story has been exclusively from Sabine's POV, will Clark's POV enter in a later part or will this be exclusively Sabine's view of the story? Now we all know that Clark will leave eventually and that will be interesting to see how Sabine handles that departure and how you will tie that up with the lyrics...

thanks for writing this beautiful story.

Mike

Create all the happiness you are able to create.
Remove all the misery you are able to remove.

Jeremy Bentham