I know this story is years old, but I loved it. Very interesting insights into the characters and their developments that really adds something to the show's story, and it's very well-written. All the stuff about Jimmy and Perry was very creative and insightful.
I'm a little surprised that Clark would show such antagonistic and negative feelings toward Superman, and at first I thought that was going to be a big problem for me, but as I read more I understand you were trying to capture justified angst over his double life and Lois' feelings about him. Even though it's still odd to me in some ways, I still appreciate the depth that it brings to the character and I do understand his emotional conflict. I definitely prefer for this character to have some inner conflict.
Overall it was just really excellent, thanks for writing
