Oh wow. Now I'm caught up.
The more those doctors were talking, I was just thinking "why don't you guys just shoot her!?" They sound so hopeless, and poor Lois and poor Clark don't need that right now! Although they do have to know what they're dealing with. This is so exciting. There is such a sense of urgency in your writing that is so unbelievable and powerful here for this story. And poor Clark! Feeling like this is all his fault, of course.
Honestly, WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO!!!!??!? I fear in their quest for a solution, there won't be time for making out/making the most of the time she has left? But... umm... I didn't think that would be the focus of the story. Not at all. I would NOT mind a little making out though.
~NICOLE
FYI- in case you didn't catch it, i LOVE this!
