Oh I liked it Shayne. I like how he swept her off her feet. I like the discription of the feeling of flying from Lois's pov. I never thought about the lights streaming together like that but it made so much sense when I read it. Of course, they would have to look like that at that speed. Nice developement of plot and character relationships. I am looking forward to more soon. Good luck to your sister and the baby! And congratulations Uncle! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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