Yeah, there's no need really to separate this story, it works well together.
Now on with the "why I like it" section, it's so cool to read this, so much like watching the episode, some of my favorite stories always make me feel like I'm watching the show and your writing has that feel.
Now on this line...
Other than a letter twice a year, and a check, he had no interest in ever revisiting his childhood.
You got me wondering, did he accidentally hurt someone and is paying restitution or is this child support???
Well done Shayne!!
Keep it coming!
TEEEEEJ/who says "GO HESTON!!!"
