Ooh, fun, Erin!
I'm not sure that this needs a companion piece from Clark's point of view; you showed his reactions through Lois's eyes all the way and, because we know stuff she doesn't, we can interpret them from his POV. So we already know that he doesn't want to do it because he might inadvertently reveal his true level of strength and possibly hurt her. And it's easy enough to imagine his reaction to being kissed!
But a sequel from his POV showing the dinner-date and him wondering what Lois wants out of it... now, that I'd love to read.
Oh, and I love the title!
Wendy
