KathyM said:
The agony permeating their lives is just excruciating. I've never been one to *need* a happy ending for a story - although I'm usually glad to see it - but this time I think I really NEED one, Sara.
I'm going to get on the board the Please, Please, Please, Sara Begging for a Happy Ending Train. Because, oh, the tunnel is long and dark and so very cold!! I'm going to need lots and lots of sunshine... bunnies and butterflies... erm... other really happy things, when this is finished.
That said, I am *so* impressed with how you've done this. How beautifully written. A poetic punch to the gut. (Ok, that's lame, but I can't think of another way to describe how reading this feels.)
I think my favorite element is how Luthor hangs heavy over this entire piece. The constant menace that shadows poor, poor, poooooor Lois!
Wonderfully done, Sara.
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