Sara, I've been bad about posting feedback for this, but let me tell you you've had me on the edge of my seat since the very beginning. You've woven such a heartbreaking scenario! I want to believe it's getting better, but that guy in the train station makes me think it's not... Poor Lois! I love her quiet defiance, like she's been asleep for a long time and she's just starting to wake up and kick.

What will she do when she gets to Smallville? And what will the Kents tell Clark?

Keep up the great work!
Kaylle