Nicole
You may have noticed I’m a reader who hasn’t been posting feedback regularly.
Unfortunately I’m a little disappointed in the direction the story has taken. I thoroughly enjoyed the first part of the story.
But have only skimmed the last few parts. The plot seems to be at a standstill.
I agree completely with Wendy and Erica. Some of the material does not advance the plot in any way. I also have a problem with the length of some of your paragraphs. This is a personal thing but I tend to wander off and lose concentration if the paragraph is too long.
This is just my opinion and I know lots of other readers will disagree.
I really love the rest of your work.
You are an excellent writer.
And I will read the rest of this to see what happens.
Tricia
