Wow! again at the awesome casual-ness (is that a word?)of this part. Definately some tension at first, very viable, very present, but then meeting up with Lana and Rick, just toning things down and mellowing the mood out, really, really well written.
Of course I'm anxious to see them mingling in the crowd and hanging together in public as a couple, but this "slow and easy" is really working and soothing things for my anxious reading self, so keep it up, keep writing, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next piece.
The "comments by Ralph" topic was a hoot! That poor guy...hee hee... he can't win in any story that I know of.
TEEEEEEEEJ
