BRAVO Leela, I knew this would come out right! I knew it, and I know there's more, but from this last section, you've gotten exactly the kind of reaction from me I was anticipating. I was tense and chewing my lip and worried, and could barely breath, but it came out just perfect.
Lois and Clark have their first fight. WOW! And you see, Lois was the aggressor, I knew she could get mean if she got impatient enough. Our good, sweet, loving Clark was foot dragging enough to get her riled and I liked how you wrote this. The last section with the skater guy set that up perfectly.
Well Done Leela!
TEEEEEEEEEEEEEJ
