Wow! What a neat idea-- very different from anything else I've read. I, too, agree that

  • it explains the New Krypton thing well
  • your muse needs bribing


This can stand alone or could be followed by more-- I guess it depends on whether you want to write some ansty stuff where either Jor-El and Lara are discovered, or tell someone, or meet up with Kal-El, or where Kal-El manages to see throught the deception. I suppose a globe built on an advanced planet such as Krypton would be drop-resistant, huh? And I suppose the recordings would be skip-resistant? goofy

~Toc

TicAndToc :o)

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