FDK: Prelude - 11/07/04 09:18 PM
It certainly does stand alone, but I'd be interested to see more if you can come up with it.
Very nice.
Paul
It certainly does stand alone, but I'd be interested to see more if you can come up with it.
Very nice.
Paul
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/07/04 10:18 PM
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“So then we will lie to him, just like the council lied to the insane when they were all exiled, telling them that they were to found a colony.”
That definitely explains the New Kryptonians and their pig-headed determination to travel millions of light years for an heir who had to be first put through a series of tests to be deemed eligible.Wonderful prequel to an amazing new tale, perhaps?
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/08/04 12:14 AM
/me tries to bribe QoC's Muse 
I hope this can be followed
Jose
I hope this can be followed
Jose
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/08/04 01:11 AM
Wow!!!
Just shows how naive I am... I would not in my wildest dreams have come up with anything like that! It's a pity your muse doesn't want to cooperate. I hope Jose's bribing works.
Oh, and yes I LOVE the NK explanation! Although I wonder how they would have found out about Kal-El....
Sira - duly impressed
Just shows how naive I am... I would not in my wildest dreams have come up with anything like that! It's a pity your muse doesn't want to cooperate. I hope Jose's bribing works.
Oh, and yes I LOVE the NK explanation! Although I wonder how they would have found out about Kal-El....
Sira - duly impressed
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/08/04 11:10 AM
hi
OMG great idea!!!! I just love it!!!
Its great please continue the fic, I think is an amazing idea about NK and all that stuff...would be intersting to read the next parts.
Karla
OMG great idea!!!! I just love it!!!
Its great please continue the fic, I think is an amazing idea about NK and all that stuff...would be intersting to read the next parts.
Karla
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/08/04 06:16 PM
Interesting! Laura
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/09/04 10:13 AM
Wow! What a neat idea-- very different from anything else I've read. I, too, agree that
This can stand alone or could be followed by more-- I guess it depends on whether you want to write some ansty stuff where either Jor-El and Lara are discovered, or tell someone, or meet up with Kal-El, or where Kal-El manages to see throught the deception. I suppose a globe built on an advanced planet such as Krypton would be drop-resistant, huh? And I suppose the recordings would be skip-resistant?
~Toc
- it explains the New Krypton thing well
- your muse needs bribing
This can stand alone or could be followed by more-- I guess it depends on whether you want to write some ansty stuff where either Jor-El and Lara are discovered, or tell someone, or meet up with Kal-El, or where Kal-El manages to see throught the deception. I suppose a globe built on an advanced planet such as Krypton would be drop-resistant, huh? And I suppose the recordings would be skip-resistant?
~Toc
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/09/04 06:41 PM
Hi,
Cute!
Cute!
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Lara turned her attention back to the baby. She heard Jor-El’s footsteps retreat into a small room in the back of the laboratory, leaving her and their son alone. She cradled the infant tightly against her and dropped a kiss on his head. “Oh, my son,” she whispered. “My son, my little Kal-El. I am so sorry. Please forgive us. If circumstances were different, we would gladly keep you and raise you!” Her eyes became misty. “Jor-El and I both love you.”
She was unaware of the passage of time; she could have been sitting there for two minutes or two years. All too soon, she felt Jor-El’s hand on her shoulder once more.
“Lara, it’s time. Everything is ready, and we must report back to the council tomorrow.”
She looked up into his eyes, and noticed that they were uncharacteristically filled with tears.
“It’s time.”
She was unaware of the passage of time; she could have been sitting there for two minutes or two years. All too soon, she felt Jor-El’s hand on her shoulder once more.
“Lara, it’s time. Everything is ready, and we must report back to the council tomorrow.”
She looked up into his eyes, and noticed that they were uncharacteristically filled with tears.
“It’s time.”
Re: FDK: Prelude - 11/12/04 12:21 AM
Mary
An excellent premise and a great explanation for the New Kryptonians!
Tricia
An excellent premise and a great explanation for the New Kryptonians!
Tricia