Hi Muffin,
I agree with Corrina. You can gloss over what doesn't work for your story, or focus on the question if it helps. The show did that all the time. There are many things that happen on the show that wouldn't be realistic in real life. We all agree to suspend our disbelief.
If you'd like another set of eyes to look at your story, send me a copy by e-mail. I have plenty of time for about the next month. After that, I have a baby due and all bets are off.
Good for you for taking the plunge. This is a very supportive group of readers.
Happy
