Hey, everybody! Erin's posting!! party

Very interesting start, Erin. New place, but some very familiar people. Some nice touches here, like the silver BMW.

I like what you've done with Lois. Still first season... but not. A little softer, a little friendlier. At least with her neighbor. More, she knows something's missing, and she's willing to admit that to herself. Very interesting little change there.

This looks like the beginning of a very cool story. Can't wait to see more. smile

Paul

When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.