Okay, that last visual was a little off-putting... but the rest of the section was top-notch
If I may offer an English-to-American translation...
They hadn't talked about where their relationship was going yet, but they would do soon.
That gave me a moment of confusion -- we'd say "would do
so soon." Still, I figured out what you meant pretty easily, so maybe I shouldn't have even brought it up
Anyway, it's great to see such a happy Clark!
He's certainly earned it.
PJ