Hi,
Interesting start.
Will someone find her before is too late?
Strangled, Clark jerked forcefully upward, only to be yanked back down by his restraints. His breathing came in pants, an icy cold sheen of sweat soaking through his clothes. Blood pounded through his head and in his ears, and his entire body shook violently. The image of Lois’s glassy eyes seared through his brain.
Again his fingers sought the chain beneath his uniform. He pressed against the ring, happy to feel it cutting into his skin. Safe.
It was only a dream. A nightmare. Lois didn’t die that day. He’d saved her. He’d saved her. She was still alive.
He repeated it like a mantra.
Lois was still alive.
Both sense something is wrong.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
