I think your idea has merit. However, in order to read your story, I have to have some periods inserted. I guess you probably have problems with the keyboard, but if you could read it over aloud and fix all the runon sentences, I think I could make some sense out of your story. I was only able to read the first couple of paragraphs before I gave up on deciphering.

It was nice that Albus came to L&C. I wondered at first if they were going to go to Hogwarts. I'm interested in reading this story after you're done with the grammar check and punctuation.

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Nancy

It's always such an embarrassment. Having to do away with someone. It's like announcing to the world that you lack the savvy and the finesse to deal with the problem more creatively. I mean, there have been times, naturally, when I've had to have people eliminated, but it's always saddened me. I've always felt like I've let myself down somehow.