Thanks everyone for the great response!! I'm definitely thinking about writing a second part...
Laura, good point on Dr. Klein. And Pam, you're absolutely right about the wording ('brave' vs. 'scared'). I will make a few changes before I send this to the archive!
Jill, it's hard to know WHO to believe about the wine and other his-vs.-hers discrepancies. But I'd say your inclination to believe Clark is a pretty good one (in most cases)!
Thanks again for reading, everyone!
--Wanda :p