Anna,
Welcome to TOGOM rewrites! You did such a nice job with this. Really captured Lois's sadness, and I thought this was particularly poignant:
‘Little, simple things... was all it took. This was the way it always worked.’
Lisa mewed, as if she was trying to get Lois to understand.
One little, simple thing. Just like... forgiving him?
Also, you are the only author I guessed right!! Thank you!
CC
