Random thoughts:
Fun stuff...I don't know I kind of like the title...
Clever way of bringing in the 'unspool'...
I'm a little bit surprised that Lois didn't show any anger at Clark after remembering the big secret, but then again I suppose even though there's this little mention of it:
She froze, still feeling some of the anger she'd experienced on that trip. But then, there was the time he'd said he hated lying to her. She knew he meant that. And that he'd always wanted to change into Superman in front of her. At least she knew he hadn't been laughing at her, behind her back
...she also remembers his sincerity and her understanding, so yeah, that balanaces out, I guess.
Loved the parting shot:
She interrupted him with a soft kiss. "It's okay, Clark. But for pete's sake, the next time you have to run off to be Superman, just say so!"
I always love it when writers make Lois so matter-of-fact-let's-get-on-with-it about CK=S...I can just see Clark being floored with a line like that.
Jen
