This was a great piece of evilness! Completely unexpected! I think (I'm getting ready to run to avoid all the rotten tomatoes form other readers!) that this works fine by itself. *However* I would love to see where you take it!
Loriel
"Inappropriate attachment" didn't begin to cover the depth of the feelings Vaughn had for Sydney Bristow. ~Ties That Bind by RJ Anderson~
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