I am in love with your cops and their superb relationship with Lois.
Nice introduction of Lana here, and the reminder that Clark is very much alone -- even though he wants to be with Lois. Fun jealousy spate there, too.
I'm a little worried about that cliffhanger of yours. Is this the "bad day" that's been hovering over Clark's head? I don't see how he could possibly strike with enough force to kill when he's so crippled by green K, but I guess you'll let us know.
One little detail, Michael: perhaps you're posting this elsewhere, where there's LnC involved at all, but could you pretty please change those baby blues to brown?
Hazel
