Pam - thanks for enjoying that scene. It seemed "right" when it popped into my head :-)
And yes, feel free to post about the word file. You are way too kind to do that!
Everyone, thanks for the feedback, and JOse - I really apologize for neglecting to use the arrow. I was being hammered with "Is it time to go yet, mommy?" (Daughter had a party to attend, and I wanted to take my rough draft and massage itinto something postable)
I will DEFINITELY post soon.
