Michael, excellant instalment.
What Hazel said.
I really like your Lois. She embodies so much of what makes Lois so special. She has strength and a no nonsense attitude toward her life and her job, but you also let us see that she cares. That's something that is often overlooked.
This is a fun amalgam of a silver age Superman with a more current Lois. This is going to be a fun ride.
Tank (who thinks that Supes had best worry now that Lois is on the scent)