One quick comment on a type o I think. At one point you wrote " His eyes looked at his" I think you meant, Her eyes loked at his. Anyway glad you posted. It was a bit short for my liking because of how long you make us wait in between sections, but it was good. She seems to be slowly coming to terms with his presence. I hope you don't wait so long to post the next bit. I'd really like to see them progress a bit more. Laura
