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FDK goes here  . Next post: Hopefully Wednesday, but maybe Thursday. Will depend on how much writing I get done in the meantime. If Thursday, it'll be late afternoon or evening. Preview Chapter 13 A minute later, she felt the other side of the bed depress as Clark slipped in behind her. Instinctually, she snuggled back into him and felt his arm wrap around her as she slipped into sleep. Thanks . Carol
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ooooooooooooo juicy very juicy  
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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Aahh, whoops. There goes Lois, without checking the water level again. Can't blame her, though. Guess she's not the only one shocked. 
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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Yes! I knew Perry was going to show up here. And now that he knows The Other Secret he can keep those two honest. Nice preview. Now we're getting somewhere (we hope). Is that HIM? Lois has got to lose the lawyer, though. Unless it's Constance. Looking forward to the rest. 
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Clark looked over at Lois again.
She was gone.
How could he have missed that? Clark!!! 
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Yes!!!!!  Oh Lois, you are digging your own grave here.  I love that it is her spilling the beans to Perry. Jealousy can be so powerful! I am glad though that it wasn't Linda hiding! The preview looks good. Hopefull it's not just for an undercover story. Looking forward to more, Natascha
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Great part and I love your preview. More of that!  Artemis
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wonderful part! love it!!!
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Delightful part. But I am worried. At some point Carol is going to revert to  and there will be a train wreck.
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Ah gaah. Clark is working with Linda?  And Lois is sulking and won't tell him about Linda and herself.  But what is going to happen now that Perry knows that Lois and Clark are married and Lois is pregnant? Will Perry still think it is a good idea to have Linda on his staff? Anyway, I loved that preview, HiM or no HiM!  Ann
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Given that the "Queen of Evil" title is still up for grabs, why are we all assuming that the person snuggling up to Clark is Lois?
Nice revelation with Perry. I'm sure he was totally astounded, too.
And I don't like Linda either. She's a good bad-girl character to throw into the mix. She's pushy, she's arrogant, she's blond, she's - ugh. I think she's a better evil competitor than Mayson ever was. At least Mayson was competent and honest. Linda's a vulture.
I wonder how many parts we'll have to wait through before Lois asks Clark if he wants a divorce. You'd think that this is a pretty important piece of information, but she's never asked him. Of course, he's never asked her, either, so they're both being lunkheaded this time around.
I hope we don't have to wait until Thursday.
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Ooh, that was soooooo good. Whoever said juicy summed it up for me!
Great, great part,
JD
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Well, just catching up with this story, and it's been a fun ride. Keep up the good work!
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Well I have been reading this story but unfortunately had absolutely no energy for feedback, sorry...
Great turn of events at the end! I hope that they now finally are able to get over the missunderstandings and talk to each other!
But wait, what am I saying...This is you we are talking about and we are only part 12. I am sure you have some more surprises for us!
Great story!
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The benefits of travel: two parts at once!
I knew Perry was going to send Clark to the Star, but I didn't expect him to find out about L&C. He won't insist that Lois not know about the undercover mission now, will he? With a marriage and a baby on the way? It's not like in the show, where L&C had a known friendship that had to look broken to outside observers....
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I just had a terrifying thought: What if Carol plans to stretch this misunderstanding out for the whole pregancy?! They don't have to fall *that* slowly, do they? 
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Fantastic part. Loved the revelation with Perry. 
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In the show, Linda never worked for the Planet. She went to Hollywood to film her life's story. Let's hope that's the same here! Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Oh, The Rival...I should expect these things, given that you're making your way through first season. But I didn't. Maybe we should start taking bets on which ep you're going to hit next.
I am hoping and betting on Clark and Perry in cahoots, and Lois has just gone and spilled all the beans...should get interesting from here!
Looking forward to more!
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Thanks guys!
I did get the next chapter finished so I'll post sometime this afternoon - not sure if I have time before I have to go get kids...
A couple general comments - in the show, Linda ended up with a 'special contribution' to the article Lois and Clark wrote and then went off to Hollywood and was going to play Lois in the movie.
I still don't get why everyone thinks I'm evil /whine/.
Thanks again everyone!
Carol
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